Beta Readers
I'm looking for some people to give me their opinions on a short story called "Between Eternities", previously known as "Freedom, Virtually" and "Untitled VR Prison Story".
It's been workshopped with good reviews (an overall rating of 4.4 out of 5) but readers have been split on whether I took the ending a step too far.
The story is a cyberpunk-ish piece, complete with profanity, sex, drugs and violence all packed into 4000 words, so if that's not your bag, you'll want to stay away. However, if you're interested, leave a comment or fire me an email.
It's been workshopped with good reviews (an overall rating of 4.4 out of 5) but readers have been split on whether I took the ending a step too far.
The story is a cyberpunk-ish piece, complete with profanity, sex, drugs and violence all packed into 4000 words, so if that's not your bag, you'll want to stay away. However, if you're interested, leave a comment or fire me an email.
6 Comments:
I'm not a writer but send it on if you want to.
Sounds like a horrible story.
Morris
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I'd like to have a look at your story. Just send me the link or text at indeterminacy / gmail / com.
Sure, send it to me. You can get my email via my blog, or c&p redphi5h@yahoo.com.au It would help to know about the publication you intend it for, its audience, and anything else you want help about, or would like judgements on.
Sounds like a beautiful story. But then again, I just love profanity, sex, drugs, and violence. I also love to read, so this is like a dream come true... :-)
hey, 'member me? hah. anyway, send it along.
In case you forgot, my e-mail is tasmithbo@aol.com.
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