Tuesday, July 26, 2005

The Potter Post

Warning: Spoilers!

I was a skeptic for years. Really, I was. The first five books had come out and everybody and their dog was telling me how great they were. First, I decided it was all overblown hype. Then, I pegged them as inconsequential kid's books. Finally, I said that I might pick them up and have a read once all seven were out. In the end, though, the decision turned out not to be mine. At the start of this school year (it seems I've known Harry all my life, but it's only been nine months, really) I took a Children's Literature class, and the first book was on the reading list.

I devoured the first book in a night. I thought it was a load of fun, but not much else. After all, Rowling had simply taken the tried-and-true formula of the British schoolboy story and jazzed it up with magic. Same for book numbers two and three. It was a lather, rinse, repeat sort of formula, and, while I had a lot of fun reading the first three books, none of them really had a huge impact on me.

Goblet of Fire and Order of the Phoenix, however, were something special. The characters, already well-fleshed out in the first three books, seemed to go beyond being mere names on a page. The darkened tone made everything much more tense. Et cetera, et cetera - I'm sure you all know what I'm talking about.

So, when Half-Blood Prince came out, I was stoked. I read the entire thing in a night. When I put it down, though, I wasn't happy with it. I thought it lacked some intangible quality of the last two. The next day, I was mulling over what exactly was wrong with it. I couldn't put my finger on it. Eventually, though, I realized what it was. It had nothing to do with the writing, the structure, or anything of that nature.

When I read, even for pleasure, I tend to focus on things such as narrative and sentence structure, the plausibility and consistency of character and dialogue, and things along those lines. I realized, though, that in reading this book, my reactions had nothing to do with any of these. Rowling had successfully drawn me into her world, and the reason I was unhappy after reading the book was because, well, things looked pretty rough for Harry.

Half-Blood Prince, I think, is by far the best book of the series so far. Rowling's ratcheted up the tension to such a point where it's going to be nigh impossible to wait for the next book. But what she really succeeds at is the darkness of tone. If Goblet of Fire and Order of the Phoenix were dark, Half-Blood Prince is pitch black.

I'd like to illustrate this with a brief excerpt from Dumbledore's death scene that I really think captures the tone of the book.

But somebody else had spoken Snape's name, quite softly.
'Severus...'
The sound frightened Harry beyond anything he had experienced all evening. For the first time, Dumbledore was pleading.


The death scene of Harry's greatest teacher (and, arguably, his most important father figure) is wonderfully underplayed by Rowling. Dumbledore doesn't go out in any blaze of glory, there's no fighting to the last gasp. His murderer simply walks up to him and kills. Harry, meanwhile, has been paralyzed and can do nothing - helplessness, it seems, is the word on this book.

Furthermore, the fact that we're presented with a book that contains no trace of confrontation with Lord Voldemort indicates that, well, we ain't seen nothin yet.

Here's hoping for a quick turnaround on the last book. I fully expect it'll knock everyone's socks off.

4 Comments:

Pat Kirby said...

Heh. Funny how perceptions vary. I agree Half-Blood Prince is dark, but I had a harder time with Phoenix. I think it's because, in Phoenix, Harry seemed to be engaged in a perpetual struggle. Thar be much angst.

With Half-Blood Prince, I didn't get the "kick in the gut" feeling until Dumbledore was killed.

I hate being drawn into any sort of hype (although, I'm less uncomfortable with book hype, than any other hype), but I love the boy wizard.

4:43 PM  
chryscat said...

I can't WAIT! And I agree wholeheartedly. The seventh book is going to awesome. But I doubt that Rowling will be able to wrap everything up to my satisfaction. Damn it.
Grins*

12:39 PM  
sporadic insanity said...

i don't know..the ending was just so abrupt. and there were several grammatical errors...that drove me crazy...it completely distracted me from what was happening.
but with that said i absolutely love the books and the story. i can't wait for the last one...even though i have heard she hasn't even started writing it.

5:25 PM  
landismom said...

I held out on HP for years too. Read the first book after the Goblet of Fire hype, and then got sucked into the whole series. I agree with what you've written here. I found The Order of the Phoenix to be annoying, but mostly because I was so annoyed with Harry. What author makes her main character act like an actual bratty teenager? A very good one, it turns out.

One of the main things I liked about this book was the mirroring of Harry's two paralysis episodes--the one on the train at the beginning, and then Dumbledore's death scene. The real problem that Harry had was that he didn't defend himself against his own, already identified, vulnerability. If only he had practiced more on thinking spells instead of saying them!

8:19 PM  

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