Thursday, May 25, 2006 - Playing Up the Ordinary

I've started reading Martin Amis' Money, which was given to me for Christmas, so I figured it was about time to get started on it. Anyway, I'm only ten pages in (gotta hit the sack since I work early in the mornings), and already Amis, who did such an exquisite job of turning the everyday world into a knot by telling everything in reverse in his amazingly original novel Time's Arrow, has done a very simple thing in such a terrific way that I feel I have to mention it. This is the kind of thing, I think, that can really elevate a writer. Instead of having his character simply take out a cigarette and be done with it, Amis writes the following:

"Yeah," I said, and started smoking another cigarette. Unless I specifically inform you otherwise, I'm always smoking another cigarette.

Great characterization here, in this one simple action. Not only do you get that the guy's a chain-smoker and the great narrative voice, but there's also a little bit of humour there.

Anyway, maybe I'm just getting overexcited about the little things here but, well, writing's all about sweating the small stuff.


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